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microman
10-20-2008, 09:12 PM
I have an idea for almost everything but I wondered if this was a good idea for a book it's about to put in a nutshell. God has a way of telling you your future or "fate" within your dreams telling you new events my characters will face a series of biblical fights none have ever witnessed. When they wake up they forget anything but the names of these characters are Micheal, Gabriel, Raphael, and Joseph 4 normal men that have a true meaning in life to fight the chaos. Lucifer is working his way to Earth the gateway to heaven to overthrow god. The only problem with using the archangels god sent them down to heaven to stop Lucifer at the gate to heaven because once through it is impossible to come back through your original form. The problem is the archangels are unaware of their existence as a human being. God must try to contact them without giving away his existence. These four men are here to be the leaders in this major battle of Heaven and Hell to see who wins the fight for the result of immortality. The story itself is told between a couple characters but it focus's among the 4 characters the most.

I show you some of what I have so far.

An illusion of man is a work of fiction only the creator truly knows what the meaning of it is. The enigma of life floats constantly getting picked, prodded, and poked till nothing is left. An mystery people have wondered about endlessly. A true work of art still being sculpted by our own paths. But what if man wasn't just part of something bigger than themselves. Something drawing to the son of the dawn for our Final March.....

All I hear is voices when my clock alarm goes off I hear it to when I enter the bus. All i hear is the rallying cry of soldiers next to me as we charge forward to the enemies. My name is being called in the hollow thought of my head as this battle rages on. Micheal...Micheal... rings in my ear i'm almost serenaded by it. I am wondering if my whole life with these dreams maybe...just maybe they are trying to tell me something.

I have more but i'll work on it some more what do you guys think should I keep it i'm not committed by it so I can change some things.

Montanarchist
10-21-2008, 12:53 PM
It doesn't sound all to original to be honest, but I guess it could work if executed properly.

microman
10-21-2008, 03:16 PM
It doesn't sound all to original to be honest, but I guess it could work if executed properly.

Well everything is not 100% original everything is based off of relevancy of everything but i see where you are coming from.

Xilmwa
10-28-2008, 07:34 PM
Well hell, and all I could come up with is calling a book series "Chapter"

So, what you reading?

Chapter 8 of Chapter One.

WHAT?